Assignment over the weekend:
Bring second draft of Writing Experience Essay:
- Revise your essay
- Use feedback provided
Essay
Notes
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Avoid clutter à Make your point à Trim à Eliminate unnecessary words or passages à
Things we already know
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Never start sentence with “And”
, “But”, “Which”, “As”
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Rephrase: Run On/Fragment/Sentence is
Too Long / Confusing
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W.C = Word Choice
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V then word = Insert
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Capitalize I à proper noun
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Time Based Organizing Patterns
(TBOP) benefit
First
Second
One experience
Another experience mediocre
For example
For instance
Eventually
In conclusion
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Avoid conjunctions in academic
essays
“I’m”, “I’ve”
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Concise
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Efficient
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Avoid definitions
- Think of a title for your essay